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It's time.
Time to leave Iraq.
Time to leave and never come back.
We've lost too many now.
The deaths make me go, "Wow."
4,000 are dead now.
4,000 that will never come home.
How many more will never come home?
How much longer will we be lied to?
How much longer do we have to put with the lies and deceit?
How much longer do we listen to Bush, a real creep?
This must end.
We should have never gone.
This has become another Vietnam.
I just wrote this one. I'm so frakking disgusted with the Bush Administration right now. 4,000 soldiers are now dead. I also submitted this to my local paper as it's currently written. Enjoy.
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whydoidothiseveryday Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2008
DO NOT give them money whatever you do, i entred poetry.com and am currently a 'semi-finalist' and they have been sending me these emails telling me to buy this and that, they only want money, you can keep your poem in the contest just don't buy anything off them
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Poison-Stripes Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks for the warning. do you like my poem, though?
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whydoidothiseveryday Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2008
yeah, it's good :)
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Poison-Stripes Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks
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RoccoBertucci Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2008  Student General Artist
Very cool! I wish you the best of luck!
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Poison-Stripes Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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EmperorNortonII Featured By Owner May 14, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
I agree!
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Poison-Stripes Featured By Owner May 14, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you!
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